Yesterday I had a sore throat and the flu, i was sick for three days , Saturday, Sunday and Monday.It was really really awfull being sick and i hated it.I had got sick from the bad weather that has recently been going on.
Firstly i had a very runny nose so I had to take a panadol to make me feel a little bit better than i had a shiver so needed to get warm, as soon as i was warm I slept at 9:00 and stayed asleep for 2hrs.
Next I woke up with a big headache so i had to take another panadol and drink are big cup of water, then my mum made me a cup of milo then i ate some toast and butter then i went back to sleep.
After That i woke up and felt a lot more better my runny nose wasn’t runny any more, I did not have a headache no more my sore throat wasn’t sore any more and i was feeling very good.
1 comments:
I'm glad that you are feeling better now Siosifa. You have used some connectives well in your recount "as soon as I...". Make sure that you use capital letters consistently too. We capitalise the first letter of a new sentence, proper nouns like names of people and places and days of the week like you have. When we talk about ourselves as 'I' this is always capitalised, could you edit this in your writing?
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